Thursday, November 21, 2019

Novel November -False Start-

So, I started with that other prologue and then I had a fun idea and the story veered in an incredibly different direction, so I had to start it over. But I'm in love with this idea, so things ought to be a little smoother from here on out :p Now that, you know, we're mostly through the month.



Prologue

A red-giant sun burned in the vast empty blackness of space. Designated “Tyl” by the astromancers of old, it now served as a regional capital for one of the best-developed sectors in Kalean Space. It represented one of the first multi-planetary joint ventures in colonization, and the uniqueness of the project had lent gravitas to the expedition. The colonists had worked harder, faster, and more unified than any others before them, and as a result had set a new paradigm for future colonial efforts.

It was a rich system, although to someone observing from the outside it might not look it. The system had only 4 planets, and only one of them was terrestrial, the rest being gas giants of various compositions. But the rich gasses accounted for nearly 40% of the fuel consumed in the sector as a whole, and the export numbers were so massive as to be nearly unbelievable. Fortunes were made in Tyl.

The terrestrial planet was Volammir, and it was a hive of activity; home to nearly 40 billion souls, seat of the System and Sector governments, and the main hub of military activity in the sector. Above the opalescent greens, blues, and golds of the planet itself hung Naval Station Kharak. It was a sprawling mass of structures, housing the Command Hub, the barracks, the Naval Academy, a fleet hospital, and a massive dockyard. Some traditions died harder than others, and the entire exterior was a wash of battle-gray paint picked out with white designations and trim.

Aedra Morian stalked up one of the narrow hallways in the command wing. Her face was a mask of seething anger, and the handful of aides and technicians idling about scattered as they saw her approaching. The command deck was all but deserted this far up, which kept the scrabbling from being too obvious and obtrusive, but the staccato 'clank-clank-clank' of her boots on the steel gangway was more than enough to warn of her presence. And a formidable figure she cut, indeed. Her marine uniform was black as the void, and trimmed in silver, and marine's were intimidating enough, even without the silver command pauldron on her shoulder and the fact that she was head and shoulders taller than everyone she stormed past.

Abruptly, she spun through a heavy bulkhead and into a small antechamber where a small man sat behind a small desk, typing into a computer furtively from a stack of papers arranged in front of him. looking blandly over his glasses, his hands continuing to fly across the keys like they had minds of their own. “Ma'am,...” was all he managed before Aedra's piercing tenor voice overwhelmed him.

“I'm here for Admiral Gorsch, and you're going to let me in there, or you're going to tell me where he is, or so help me, I will take these files...” and she slammed a stack of files onto the desk with enough force to reverberate into the floor, “... and shove them so far up your...”

“Commander Morian! I thought I might be hearing from you today. Come in please.” The portly yet genteel Admiral Zandar Gorsch stood in the doorway across from the desk, smiling disarmingly as Aedra rounded on him and stalked into his office. He grimaced to his aide-de-camp before gently swinging the bulkhead closed and returning to his own desk, pointedly ignoring the silently seething giantess of a marine sulking at attention in the center of the room. He sat in his chair, leaned back, steepled his fingers on his chest, and smiled.

“Now, Lance Commander Morian, what seems to be the trouble?”

With a bang, she flung the stack of files down onto his desk and erupted.

“This is absolutely, unutterably, and fantastically demeaning, sir. I know I'm universally mocked and ignored by the brass, but I was told I would have say in my team composition. I know It's not a popular idea, but as a Lance Commander, that's MY decision to make. I am the team commander, and if I want a mixed bag, then by the 5 gods I ought to be able to have one.... sir.”

She straightened up and took a deep breath as the weight of her situation began to resurface over the bubbling mire of anger. She was in the Fleet Admiral's office. Yelling at him. Loudly. For his part, the Admiral weathered the storm well. Only the smallest signs of exasperation crept into his face, and those quickly slipped back into his inscrutably polite smile. With a sigh, he leaned forward over the desk and examined the folders one at a time. He nodded and hummed for several minutes before sitting back and raising his palms.

“You wanted a mixed bag, and you got one, Lance Commander. I fail to see the problem.”

Aedra stepped forward and pointed at the offending stack of folders. “Five humans, dammit! I've got five humans, two elves, two dwarves, and a single Ork. One! They couldn't even get a little closer to balance?! All of us Fae together pull even with those humans! It's ridiculous! It's less diverse than a board of trustees! I thought you of all people would understand what I'm trying to do!”

Without warning the Admiral stood, smashed his fist into the desk and bellowed, his voice like a thunderclap.

“By Kaz' beard, Aedra! You're lucky you only have five! I fought the council for days on this! You have every right to be angry about this, but don't you DARE put this on me. I've got a whole fleet waiting for 'the little admiral' to slip up.”

He straightened the items on his desk and composed himself.

“I'm the first Dwarfish admiral in the Navy. You elves have three, and the Orks will be lucky to get a captaincy in the next hundred years. The distrust and misgivings of the old ways are as strong as ever, and we Fae have to work together, not squabble.”

Aedra stared pointedly at the floor.

“Dismissed.”

She spun on her heel and headed for the door.

“Lance Commander...”

She froze halfway through the bulkhead and turned.

“If you want them to reconsider in the future, then you better make them the best damn marines in the fleet.”

Aedra smiled and saluted. “Aye aye, sir.”

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